Dear Uncertain One, oh! I hold your feelings in my EYES as I stare at your two poems! You succeeded in capturing your feelings so clearly! As a writer, you did such a great job of paralleling these two cities of Istanbul and Atlanta. I like especially the contrast between "they don't know" and I don't know"! How interesting! You have such deep feelings and insights!
Dear Uncertain One, oh! I hold your feelings in my EYES as I stare at your two poems! You succeeded in capturing your feelings so clearly! As a writer, you did such a great job of paralleling these two cities of Istanbul and Atlanta. I like especially the contrast between "they don't know" and I don't know"! How interesting! You have such deep feelings and insights!
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